I dropped my bag on the floor and dialled my mother's number.
"Come on, Mom. Pick up the phone. Come on," I said, feeling anxious.
I almost wanted to end the call when I heard voices. I was safe as my mother had picked up the phone.
"Hello mom. Where are you? There is a woman who claims that you are her friend. In her twenties," I said, in a rush.
"Are you alright? Don't follow her. She may have ill intentions. I will be reaching in five minutes. I went to the market and have forgotten about the time. Don't go so close to the woman, understand?" she said, her voice filled with concern.
Paragraphing for the speeches. Did not just say 'I said' or 'I asked' but used 'I said, feeling anxious', 'I said, in a rush.' and 'she said, her voice filled with concern.'.
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