Friday, February 10, 2012

Synthesis and Transformation 1

Do this test. All the best!

I am very sorry. I have given the wrong link. :(
 The link should work now.

1. Pauline is a clever girl. Zoe is a clever girl.

Student A's response: Pauline and Zoe is a clever girl.

2. You have to listen to the instructions. Otherwise, you will not know what to do.

Student B's response: Unless you know what to do, otherwise you have to listen to the instructions.

Student C's response: Unless you listen to instruction, you will not know what to do.

3. The boy was punished because he was mischievous.

Student D's response: Due to the boy's mischief, he was punished.

Student E's response: Due to his mischeif, the boy was punished.

4. Dan decided to quit hockey. I was completely shocked.

Student F's response: I was completely shocked when Dan's decision is to quit hockey.

5. "Will you come to my birthday celebration tomorrow?" Tim asked Mary.

Student G's response: Tim asked Mary whether she can attend his birthday celebration.

Student H's response: Tim asked Mary would she go to his birthday celebration the next day? 

Comment on the why above responses are incorrect.
Index numbers 1 to 10: Responses A and B
Index numbers 11 to 20: Responses C and D
Index numbers 21 to 31: Responses E and F
Index numbers 32 to 42: Responses G and H

84 comments:

  1. mdm toh,i can't go in to 'google docs':(

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    1. Me three and I do not have google account.....

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    2. Mdm Toh, I don't have google account. How do I do the homework?

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    3. luckily i got a google account..

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    4. Mdm Toh,I can't get into the 'google docs' too and I don't have a google account.

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  2. Mdm Toh I need to sign in to my email and need your permission before I can go in to the google docs.

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    1. So I sent you the permission request already, can you accept the permission

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  3. Me too. Please accept my request mdm Toh

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  4. i also send the permission to mdm toh,hope she accepte it.otherwise,i had to shut off the computer because my brother had to use it

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    1. i think i got to leve at about 2.30pm,7 minutes away

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    2. Student G:The words 'can' should be written in past tense while 'attend' should be written the same way as the question,come to.

      Student H:Ther should not be any question mark as the person is telling not asking

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  5. I cant get the permission. Mdm toh please accept my request.

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  6. I Can't Get Permission.Mdm Toh Please Acceot My Request

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  7. One less homework MUAHAHA
    Ya i can't do it cause we need your permission

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  8. I can't get the permission too!!
    please accept my request.
    Thank You

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  9. Mdm Toh I cannot go in too please help us!:(

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  10. I can't sign in because i have no google account.Am i suppose to make one?But i don't know how to make.

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    1. Me to...tell me if you found out how to create.Thanks!

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  11. Nevermind.Is it okay if I use my brother's gmail account?

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  12. Errr we already have with our MCOnline you don't remember that Mdm. Selvi teach us????????????????????????????

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  14. I wonder when Mdm Toh will accept our request

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  15. Nabilah binte RosmanFebruary 10, 2012 at 8:35 PM

    I can t get in how must I do this

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  16. mdm toh i don't have a google account so how am i suppose to do this homework.

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  17. Mdm Toh, can you accept my request?

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  18. Hey guys!
    just go to mconline and click on docs...
    then go to google.
    DO NOT EXIT THE MCONLINE!!
    only then you have a google AC!

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  19. How do I get to the test? It just shows the homepage of google
    docs :/.

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  20. I cannot reach the test.It just shows the homepage of google docs:/.

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  21. i cannot do the test it just show the homepage of google

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  22. How do you reach the test?

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  23. Mdm Toh,Please Accept My Request

    -Lim Zheng Quan

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  24. How to do the test >.<

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  25. Yeah how to do the test
    Yelong

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  26. finally it can be done

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  27. Oh yeah!!!!!! :D i can finally rest now cuz i done my homework!!!!!!!!!


    ernest

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  28. Student E spelt is mischief wrong. It should be mis*chief* instead of mis*cheif*
    Student F when he uses the word *when*, that means its happening at the same time.
    YAY FIRST TO COMMENT AGAIN

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  29. Student A response was wrong because the subject (Pauline and Zoe) and the verb(is) does not match because 'a clever girl' should be are clever girls. Student B's response was wrong because the meaning was not same as the stemp(the question)

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  30. student G it should be in the past tense and there is no attend in the sentence.there is no time in the answer.


    student H there is no if and it is not a question

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  31. student E should write the boy in the clause:Due to his mischief,the boy was punished.
    Thats why he or she is wrong.
    Student F wrote 'when' which means that it is happening at the same time.
    YES!3RD TO COMMENT!!

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  32. Student's A answer is wrong because the it is supposed to be are of plural foam and there ar4e two girls not one.
    The answer are not in order in Student'B answer.It meaning changes and the meaning was meant to be if you listen to the instrution than you will know what to do.You have to listen to the instutions first...
    Thank You :)

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    1. Ah sirry i meant insrutions second last line.

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  33. I meant sorry.
    Alisha

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  34. For respond E, there is a spelling error on the word mischief.
    For respond F,Both action did not happened at the same time so he/she must replace the 'when'.

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  35. respond D:there is 's so it is wrong
    respond C: the is missing and it should be instructions

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  36. A) It should be 'are' instead of 'is a' and it should be girls not girl.
    B) Do not need to add in 'otherwise'.

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  37. For respond e-->there is a spelling error on the word mischief.
    For respond F-->cannot use when because it was noy at the same time



    jonathan

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  38. For student E,there is a spelling error on the word mischief.
    For student F,both actions did not happen at the same time so student F needs to replace the word 'when'.

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  39. Student C's Answer Is Wrong As 1 Word is Missing,The 'the',And The Instructions Should Have A 's'.
    Student C's Answer Is Wrong As The Boy Should Be In The Clause But Is In The Phrase Now.We Need To Swap The Boy And His From Both Sides.

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  40. Respond E- both actions were not happening in the same timing. The word had been used wrongly for when.
    Respond F- The mischief had been spelt wrongly.

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  41. For respond G did not use past tense for can it should be could
    and for respond H it was us translating so we do not need a question mark for it.

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  42. Student A anwser is wrong because both gitls are plural so the is and the girl must change must chanage to plural form. Student B no need to add the otherwise in it

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  43. response g is wrong it is will so t should be would and attend should be go and there is no the next day
    response h is wrong you do not need to put a ? in a reported speech

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  44. E: Mischief is spelled wrongly.
    F: There should not be when in the sentence and the tense is wrong.

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  45. Student A's answer is wrong as there are 2 subjects, Pauline and Zoe. He should not use is for plural as is is singular. THe girl is also wrong because student A did not put it as girls.
    For student b, he/she must not put otherwise as it is not necessary. He/She also put the part with 'instruction' the opposite way and the 'don't know' part.

    ernest

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  46. For student G's respond,he/she did not use past tense for can it should be could
    For student H's respond,he/she put a question mark for it but it is not needed as we are telling someone and not asking.

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  47. Student A's response:'Pauline and Zoe " are plural subjects , therefore "is" is changed into "are" and if it is plural, it should be "girls'.
    Student B's response:The sentence structure is opposite and "otherwise' should not be included as there is a conjunction already.

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  48. Student G's response: The "can" must change to "would" as the question was asking for "will" and the "will" should me in past tense and there is no "the next day" in the response and although the question put "tomorrow".

    Student H's response: There is no "if" or "whether" in this response and there is not needed to put a question mark as we are doing a reported speech not a direct speech.

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  49. g... tenses
    h... sentence structure and punctuation.
    ..Misha...

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  50. 1)the word is should be change to are for student A as it is plural.
    2)student B wrote it the wrong side.
    stuent C it should be instructions not instruction

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  51. The punctuation,the tenses and kept on repeating the word!
    Benedict lum

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  52. There is nothing wrong for C.
    For Student D he/she should put *Due to his mischief*first instead of the boy's mischief

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  53. student g should not change the come but the student change it to student


    student h should not write question mark and that student should write whether or if instead of would

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  54. Student c is wrong because he wrote intruction not intructions.
    Student d is wrong because he suppose to write due to his mischief not due to his mischievous.

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  55. Student C's answer is wrong because he wrote the word instructions wrongly.Student D's answer is wrong because he was supposed to write due to his mischief,the boy was punished.

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  56. Student A should change is to are and girl to girls and take out the a as it is plural

    Student B should have turn his/her answer the opposite way as it would have been correct if it was turn around.'Otherwise' from the answer was uneccessary.

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  57. Student G should not write attend and should write go as he/she should follow the root and change the tense.He/she should also write the time of the action.

    Student H should not respond it as a question and should express it as a reported speech.

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  58. c is wrong because he wrote intruction instead of the intructions
    d is wrong because 'the boy' should be in the second part

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  59. Student A is wrong because Pauline and Zoe are plural, not singular and the girl should be in plural.

    Student B is wrong because the meaning was not same as the stem(the question) and the condition should go second.

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  60. A, was wrong as his/she tense was wrong it was past tense as 'is' is a present tense and they are plural 'the ,is a clever girl' 'is' wrong and should be are,'a clever girl' is are clever girls.
    Owen Ho jun Wai

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  61. Student E is wrong because he spelt 'mischeif' wrongly. It should be spelt 'mischief'. Student F is wrong because he should not put the conjunction 'when'. He should put 'at'. Another mistake ' Dan's decision is to quit hockey' is wrong it supossed to be 'Dan's decision TO quit hockey. Watch out for your mistakes students E and F!

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  62. Student C : the "instruction" should have a "s".
    Student D : the "he" must comes first then "the boy".

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  63. Student G response is wrong as it miss out 'the next day.'
    Student H should respond in a reported speech manner.
    Yelong

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  64. student e spell mischief wrongly
    student f use when it means happening at the same time

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  65. For student C's answer, the instruction should be plural(instructons). For student D's answer, the boy should be at the clause of the sentence, not the phrase.

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  66. E:Student E spell the word mischief wrongly.
    F:Student F should use the word 'at' instead of 'when'.

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