Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Make this better!

#1 - What is wrong?
Good job done, Zheng Quan! Clear and complete explanation.
#3 - Oops, please tilt your head to read this...
#4 - Another great piece of work :)
#5 - Can you help improve on the explanation?
#6 - what are the missing points?
#7 - Oops again...but why is this explanation incomplete? What are the missing points?
#8 - What is the misconception here? What should it be?

67 comments:

  1. some neat,some untidy.1.food never go to roots

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  2. eh,wrong concept.must pay attention in class.
    anwer,the leaves make food and travel trough the food tubes to the rest of the plant,the water absorb by the roots travel trough the xylem and to rest of the plant

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  3. The food arrows must go all the way to the roots

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  4. The food arrow must go to the roots

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  5. The food from the leaves is not going down the roots.Zheng Quan ur work is awesome!Ye Long

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  6. 1. The food is not traveling through the stem but floating through the air to the roots

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  7. The food from the leaves are not going to the roots. jonathan

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  8. Picture 1 the food never go to the roots. Some of them are incomplete while some of them never explain the concept of the experiment...... um i don't know. AND some of them never write neatly so MDM Toh can't read proberly so she marked it wrong

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  9. #6;you must explain that the food make by the leaves ttravel from where to where.



    yours,
    owen

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  10. good jod jun yang!

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  11. the food is going to the roots which is wrong
    jayden ting

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  12. they missed out some words

    #5 The water and food inside the plat travel through the water and food carrying tube called
    the xylem and phloem tube.
    the water travels through the xylem tube while the food travel through the phloem tube.

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  13. good jod zheng quan!

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  14. #1 The food doesn't go to the roots.
    #5 The xylem (blue) transport water to different parts of the plant while the phloem (black) transport food to the different parts of the plant.

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  15. For Picture 1,the food path did not travel to the roots.The Food Arrow must go to the roots.And The Third Pic's Explanation is neat.

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  16. #1
    note: food never drops out of nowhere. oh and pls remember that food goes to the roots within the plant, and it doesn't drop out of the leaves and go back into the soil/ground. for whoever this is, hope my advise works!

    ~misha~

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  17. the food did not go to all the parts of the plant jerron lim

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  18. the others are incomplete or dont really explain the thingy (i dont know) properly.

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  19. Picture 1: The food arrow were suppose to be INSIDE the tree
    Picture 2: GOOD JOB ZHENG QUAN no need for improving
    Picture 3: Oh wow Jun Yang 1st time i see ur name o__O
    Picture 4: Owen nicely done
    (Wow so many *well dones* in a row)
    Picture 5: The xylem and phloem is the one doing the transporting.... =.=)
    Picture 6: From where to where? You never say o__O
    Picture 7: Same problem from where to where?
    Picture 8: THE ROOTS ARE THE ONE TO TAKE IN WATER THE TUBES(XYLEM) TRANSPORTS

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  20. For the first picture, the guy did not show that the food travel to the roots and for the answers..... when you talk about the water/food traveling to the other parts of the plant, you must say from something to something.

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  21. #1 The food in the plant came out of the plant and it didn't transport the food to the other parts of the plant.Only the water is transported to other parts of the plant correctly.

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  22. The food tube on pic1 did not go to the roots

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  23. wow so many coment on science

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  24. O_0 the last picture the xylem should not be the xylem taking in the coloured water, it must be the roots which is taking in the coloured water................ :p

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  25. For Q1, why is the food going out of the plant ?! If the food really goes out of plants,well... I don't know what to say ^^

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  26. no.1 the food arrows are outside the tree and not in it.zheng quan wan is correct and very good job.Jun yang wan is very impressive.good job.owen also did a good job too.no.5 explantion is no good.No.6,7 nad 8 explantion is incomplete and not good.

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  27. Oh,Zhen Quan and Owen's works are very good :)

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  28. #1 why are the food tubes outside the plant?

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  29. erm......The food did not point at the roots so that is 1 mistake.The 2nd mistake is that he did not point the water inside the leaves.The 3rd one[maybe quite incorrect]is maybe the orange arrows are outside the plant.So that might be optionl.The final one is the water arrows did not point at the end of the roots so that maybe the prove that the plant did not absorb the water.And also,must include more arrows.And the stem has joint arrows[Just maybe that the arrows are mixed out][and its the blue arrows]It might be confusing.1st question.
    Benedict Lum
    P5-6

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  30. #1 The food is not transported to the different parts of the plant.

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  31. 1. the food did not go into the roots. If the food did not go into the roots, the tree would me dead now.

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  32. some of their work are really different but good :(

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  33. 5)The leaves do not transport food to the pholem and to all parts of the plants.
    IT is the pholem that transports the food from the leaves to all parts of the part
    jonathan

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  34. well done zhen quan

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  35. The food did not travel to the leaves and the food travels from the leaves to the other parts of the plant.


    -Drryl Chan-

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  36. The food on 1. the food path does not link to the root. For 2. the concept is all in the answer as he explain it clearly. It is the same too for 4.
    For 5 the person maybe got mix up with the fact of phloem and xylem. And the work for 5 is really untidy and need to improve on the writing skill.
    For 6, the person really miss some thing important so the sentence is really incomplete. The missing point is from where to where. For 7 the answer did not mention the the tube transport food and water

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  37. some of the food is out of the tree.
    maybe they should set the path of the phloem tube carrying the food in the tree instead of outside the tree..
    Zheng quan,you did a good job.
    maybe we should improve on our hand writing.
    They are untidy.
    Only some neat..
    wow Marcellino really written a lot.

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  38. #6 is my work and I jnow my mistakes. Sorry mdm toh.....heeheeheee........
    #1. The arrows are out of the tree. so it is wrong....

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  39. #8 i don't,i forgotten it -_-

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  40. Hui Ting : Is you dead or the tree dead ?!

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  41. erm... sorry i type wrongly it should be (be)

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  42. Those people who are... um i mean who have well done stickers don't have to improve. o_0 first time saw junyang's work in the blog.

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  43. #2 Keep up the good work Zheng Quan!

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  44. 1.The food should be transported to all parts of the plant, its not only the roots.

    5.the leaves does not transport the food but ploem tubes does.

    6.The person did not mention where the food come from.

    7.The person did not mention where the xylem tubes will transport water/mineral salt to
    all the parts of the plant.

    8.The person did not explain,he only said how.

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  45. #1 The food should not go to the roots as the food is supposed to go to the other parts of the plant.#8 The xylem tubes do not absorb the coloured water as it is the roots job to take in water and than the xylem tube's job to carry the water to all parts of the plant.#6 Did not mention the roots and the leaves #7 Did not mention where the phloem tubes and the xylem tubes transported the water and food to.#5 The leaves do not transport food.

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  46. #5
    It should be"1.)The pholem transports food from the leaves to other parts of the body.2.)The xylem trasports water from the roots to other parts of the body."
    #1
    food from the leaves does not flow to the roots.

    Anyway, good job owen.
    [ Jevon Tan ]

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  47. 1.The food did not go into the roots and it is outside of the tree.
    2.Good job ZhengQuan,i will learn from you!He is correct because he applied the right concept and used scientific words.
    3.Good job JunYang.
    4.Good job Owen , good work
    5.Food:The leaves absorb the sunlight which then photosynthesis,the food then enters the xylem and the xylem transport the food to all parts of the plant.
    Water:the roots takes in the water and minerals which then goes to the xylem,then the xylem transport the water to all parts of the plants.
    6:from the leaves
    7:To all parts of the plant
    8:same as number 5



    alton chua

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  48. 1.The 1st mistake is the arrows did not go all the way to the roots @ the 2nd mistake is that the pholem is out side the plant.
    junyang 5-6

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  49. do we need to pass our english learning sheet?
    or keep it? :)

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  50. 1#:the food never go to the roots
    2#:Good job Zheng Quan
    3#:good explanation
    4#:Nice work Owen
    5#:Food -> The leaves make the food and transport it to the pholem and to the other parts of the plant.
    Water -> The roots absorb the water and transport it to the xylem and to the other parts of the plant.
    6#:Never tell where the food is from
    7#:The last sentence never write where the water is transported to.
    8#:Shoud be: The xylem transport water from the coloured water to the other parts of the plant.

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  51. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK PEOPLE WHO DID WELL!!


    Wei Ting :)

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  52. 1.the food did not go to the roots as the food arrow is outside of the plant.

    2.good job zheng quan! i like your answer!

    3.good job jun yang! good answer!

    4.good job owen! that is a good answer!

    5.it should be: food and water travel by tubes called the xylem and phleom

    6.food:the leaves make food and the food goes to the phleom and it will be transported to other parts of the plant
    water:the roots take in water and minerals from the ground and it goes to the xylem which is then transported to other parts of the plant.

    7.same as 6.

    8.same as 5.

    REGAN

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  53. #1 yeah, forgot to say that food tubes do not fly. if they fly, there would be no gravity and we would be in the air too!

    *_* misha *_*

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  54. #4 Excellent work,Owen!

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  55. GOOD WORK Owen @ Zheng Quan!

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  56. 1.Food does not go outside the plant.
    2.Good Job,Zheng Quan,I will learn from you.
    3.Good Job,Jun Yang,good answer.
    4.Good Job Owen,I will learn from u the correct concept.
    5.Food:from the leaves is correct but not to the pholem,it is to al parts of the plant.
    Water:The roots is correct but not to the xylem,it is to all parts of plant.After all,nice try.
    6.It is incomplete,your mistake from where to where.Nice try.
    7.Your first one is correct but the second is wrong,xylem to?
    8.The xylem does not take in water but the roots take in water.


    Glenn Tan

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  57. 1 u should continue all the way to the roots,if not its not considered to all parts of the plant, but nice try
    2 good job i will learn from u
    3 good job
    4 good job
    5 nice try, the leaves don't transport the food, it only makes the food and pass it to the phloem which transports the food to all parts of the plant and not the other way round
    6 u should talk about it in more formal way
    7 the leaves makes the food not provides it
    8 the xylem does not take in the water but the roots takes in the water

    tevin

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  58. #1 The food tube doesn't travels until the roots.
    #2 Excellent work done,Zheng Quan!
    #3 Continue to work hard,Junyang!
    #4 Good job,Owen!
    #5 The leaves does not transport food but the pholem transports while the roots also does not transport water but the xlyem does transports.
    #6 The water should come from roots while the food should come from leaves.
    #7The person did not include to all parts of the plant.
    #8 The person did not incude the pholem tube.

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  59. #1:The food was not transported to the roots.
    #2:Job Well Done,Zheng Quan.
    #3:Stay Smart,Junyang.
    #4:Excellent,Owen.
    #5:The pholem tubes transports the food to other parts of the plant.
    #6:The phylem tubes transports food taken from the leaves to other parts of the plant while the xylem tubes transport water and mineral salts from the roots to other parts of the plant.
    #7:The xylem tubes transport water and mineral salts from the roots to other parts of the plant.
    #8: The xylem tubes carries the red water from the base of the stem to different parts of the plant.

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  60. 1.The food was not transpoted to the roots.
    2.Job well done,Zheng Quan.
    3.Well done Jungyang.
    4.Execellent work Owen.
    5.The pholem transpots the food to the other part of the plant.
    6.Water travels by the water carrying tubes from the roots to the other parts of the plant.Food travel by the food carrying tubes from the leaves to other parts of the plant.
    7.Water travels by the water carrying tubes from the roots to the other parts of the plant.
    8.The roots take in the water and the water carrying tubes transpots to the other parts of the plant.

    Alisha

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  61. This is question 5.I might be quite incorrect so....PLEASE MIND IF I AM WRONNG!And help correct me.Let me spy the 1st mistake!.............Oh!The two concepts must be improved by more imformation like for example [reforming sentence ar....]the food travels through the phloem which is at the outer of the stem and the water goes through the xylem which is iner in the stem which is below the phloem tube that transport food as water is more importantfor plants than food.[Mind my language hehe......]thats my question 5
    Benedict
    5-6

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  62. #1 the phoelom tubes are sticking out of the tree#2goodjob#3well done#4good job dong wng and i van

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  63. 1st picture,The food did not travel to the roots.5rd picture,the food is not supposed to be transported to the phloem and to all parts of the plant.It should be the ploem where you use the word 'transport'.Same for the water.6th picture,The person who wrote it did not say where the food or water came from.7th picture,theperson who wrote it did not say where the water travel to.8th picture,the roots are suppose to be the want taking in the water not the xylem tube.

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  64. =.= so many copy me use 1: transport....
    format =.=

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