Thursday, April 19, 2012

Good phrases/sentences for continuous writing

Dear 5-6,

Your English Paper 1 is coming and I really hope you would do well. Here's some good phrases and sentences that may be useful for your continuous writing. Bear in mind that you have to modify these sentences to suit your context.

Phrases to replace commonly overused words (substitutes for 'Say')

- Grumbled continuously
- Chorused in unison
- Cried unbelievably
- Declared abruptly
- Exclaimed gruffly
- Hissed in almost hysterical happiness
- Interjected suddenly
- Quipped with a laughter
- Sputter angrily
- Yelp in dismay
- Stammer in fear

Phrases describing various emotions

Anger
- The man bellowed with rage and stared at me balefully.
- Rage flamed my face, flaring wide my nostrils.
- Soon, all that suppressed, belated anger began to express itself in a frenzied rage.

Relief
- She took a deep breath of fresh air and felt her heart rising like a kite that some child had just released to the heavens.
- He felt a great load lifted off her chest.

Fear
- An icy fear crept up Nancy's spine and her heart began to beat wildly.
- I shivered and closed m eyes despairingly as the cold blade of knife touched me.
- The distressed girl was gesticulating wildly towards the beach. Someone was drowing!
- She gripped her handbag on her lap more tightly and peered nervously around the dark, deserted street.

Happiness
- They tried not to shout, expressing their delight in hushed voices.
- She was overwhelmed with joy.
- Her eyes twinkled with happiness.
- There was a song in every heart, cheerfulness in every face and a spring in every step.

Shock/Surprise
- She gave a startled exclamation.
- She raised her eyebrows and stared open-mouthed.
- Her eyelids fluttered in disbelief.
- Exhilaration bubbled up inside her like soda water.


All the best,
Miss Liew






7 comments:

  1. Do share your good phrases/sentences here!

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  2. My good phrases are:
    Anger
    -boiling with rage
    -looked daggers at her
    -mad as a hornet/like a bull/mad with rage
    -gooseflesh/goose pimples
    -gritted his teeth and clenched

    Annoyence
    -a sharp pang of jealousy
    -to my chagrin
    -getting over somebody nerves
    -ruffle her feathers
    -peeved
    -nagging worry
    -my stomach flutters
    -so keyed up
    -brow furrowed in concearn

    Bravery/Courage
    -plucked up
    -indomitable
    -fearless and unflinching
    -nerves of steel
    -unflinching/undeterred/resolute in the face of
    -true grift

    Desire/Longing
    -burning desire
    -longing
    -strong craving
    -itching
    -dying/eager/anxious
    -agong
    -keen for

    Embarrestment
    -went red
    -hung their heads
    -bashful
    -tingle with emberresment

    Exicetment/Happines
    -skipped a beat/missed a beat
    -adrenaline rush
    -carried away
    -delight was written on the face
    -screeched with delight
    -with glee
    -excitment skittered down
    -prickle
    -let loose a shriek of delight
    -wild with excitment
    -walking/floating on air
    -wonderment
    -relish (take pleasure in)

    Fear
    -tears of horror streamed her face
    -trembled with fear
    -made my spine tingle
    -chilled me to the bone
    -turned ashen white
    -at loss for words
    -screamed her heads off

    Good weather
    -cloud capped hills
    -fluffly whit clouds
    -splendid sunset
    -blistering hot afternoon
    -a flood of cheery sunshine was pouring

    Bad weather
    -violent squalls
    -brisk wind
    -dark clouds grew ominously
    -streak of lightning
    -showers of rain
    -heavy clouds
    -sudden gust of wind
    -pitter-patter of the rain

    Alisha

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  3. Nice work Alisha! Thanks for sharing :) Let's keep the responses coming!

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  4. My good phrases/words are...
    Other words for said
    -added
    -continued
    -agreed
    -began
    -commented
    -cried
    -declared
    -exclaimed
    -announced
    -related
    -yelled
    -mentioned
    -chattered
    -responded
    -described
    -argued

    Other words for then
    -first
    -second
    -third
    -next
    -before
    -after
    -afterwards
    -later
    -after a while
    -by and by
    -later on
    -last
    -finally
    -at long last

    Other words for fat/big
    -enormous
    -monstrous
    -giant
    -tremendous
    -massive
    -plump
    -obese

    Other words for lots
    -many
    -numerous
    -various
    -plentiful
    -countless
    -abundant
    -profuse

    Other words for go
    -move
    -continue
    -leave
    -travel
    -depart
    -proceed
    -pass
    -flee

    Other words for see
    -notice
    -observe
    -spot
    -discover
    -regard
    -picture

    Other words for do/work
    -perform
    -finish
    -complete
    -act
    -achieve
    -commit

    Other words for fun
    -enjoyable
    -fantastic
    -wonderful
    -marvelous
    -joyous
    -splendid
    -incredible

    Other words for get
    -receive
    -earn
    -won
    -obtain
    -gather
    -retrieve
    -purchase

    Other words for very
    -incredibly
    -wonderfully
    -marvelously
    -extremely
    -quite
    -fantastically

    Other words for nice
    -pleasant
    -happy
    -funny
    -witty
    -inspiring
    -gracious
    -kind
    -lively
    -playful
    -considerate
    -merry
    -friendly
    -helpful
    -gentle
    -warm
    -generous
    -cheerful
    -relaxed
    -thoughtful
    -strong
    -caring
    -joyful

    Other words for went/walked
    -rushed
    -drifted
    -strolled
    -marched
    -sailed
    -jumped
    -limped
    -slipped
    -paraded
    -glided
    -shuffled
    -dashed
    -hustled
    -scurried
    -skipped
    -hopped
    -flew
    -stormed
    -galloped
    -rolled
    -hobbled
    -floated
    -hurried
    -wandered
    -darted
    To describe fear
    -blinked sweat from my eyes
    - heart almost stopped beating
    -staring in disbelief
    -stomach turned to ice
    -frozen to the spot
    -shuddering fear.
    To describe shock
    -aghast at his face
    -stood transfixed
    Phrases for embarrassed
    -crimson red
    -flushed bright pink
    -glowed red
    -turned scarlet
    To describe sadness
    -deep sorrow

    -heavy heart

    -dark cloud surrounds you

    To describe happiness
    -jumping up and down with joy
    -in high spirit
    -screamed with joy
    -cried out of happiness

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    1. My phrase are
      Becone angry
      Red face
      Cried out of happines

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  5. The suspense was unbearable.

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  6. The suspense was unbearable.

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